Into the Veil by Jennifer R. McDonald
4 stars
There was a lot that I enjoyed about this book. The premise was original and interesting, and the plot moved along quickly. Back story and characterization were done with skill and the relationships between characters were engaging. As a secondary English teacher, I know that teenagers (in particular girls) would enjoy this novel.
This is one of the most enjoyable indie books I've read recently. The author should be congratulated on a good read. It would have been a five star read, but for one thing.
There are some errors in grammar and punctuation that would benefit from being addressed. A good edit and this book would be a five star read!!
4 stars
There was a lot that I enjoyed about this book. The premise was original and interesting, and the plot moved along quickly. Back story and characterization were done with skill and the relationships between characters were engaging. As a secondary English teacher, I know that teenagers (in particular girls) would enjoy this novel.
This is one of the most enjoyable indie books I've read recently. The author should be congratulated on a good read. It would have been a five star read, but for one thing.
There are some errors in grammar and punctuation that would benefit from being addressed. A good edit and this book would be a five star read!!